The sun stung the eye with silken smiles.
Run! to the water
No, lets go back now
Oh look! the boat is floating
Oh no, its not!
This is my house.
Phuchuck! No house no more.
There were no walls.
Just the big blue sea
carrying a whole lot of sewage may be.
The little kid, with the tiny mouth
found the pani puri too big for a bite.
The monkey girl found the sun too bright
for her eyes.
The waves of the sea
stir the sea breeze
which flutters the strands of hair
and spreads the stench in the air
She sits by the window
and with a slow push
of her stare
blows bubbles in the air
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Tuesday, April 11, 2006
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i dont know how to answer the do you try to rhyme question.
ReplyDeleteand the moon went pop like a bubble....?
ReplyDeletecoouldnt put that in, river child. restless mind...
ReplyDeletenot really.
ReplyDeleteon news channels on various occasions.
but do u know which one of those i am?
ya.
ReplyDeleteMan...its been ages I havent been to any beach of any sort :(
ReplyDeleteNice poem there Chamki...and pic was awesome too :D
Greetz!!
u have put on weight.....
ReplyDeleteyour policy of photographing yourself in company of less attractive women still lives I see...
ReplyDeleteYou look like a child!
ReplyDeleteAarzoon> thanks
ReplyDeleteAneesh> I'm glad i have
Erebus> I don't think they are less attractive, pallavi has got her shades oin which i think was a bad idea, and akshita is konkana sen so...
There are other reasons too... can't put them here!
nonedone> Don't i talk like one? Write like one? and you look like a giraffe!
:P
Cinnamon girl>hee hee
ReplyDeletei was on tv today by the way
on C tv though at 7:30
Why do you come on TV ?
ReplyDeleteNext time, i can record it, and put it up for all to see! Just tell me when.
Dpak> Its been very few times and this time i was there because i know the host of that hopeless and badly shot show. Its a good thing nobody watches it because even if you did you wouldn't be able to see anything clear.
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